I untied my hair
Swiftly carressed with my fingers
Fell on the bed
Magnetised by the pillow!
Looked up to see
And out of the big window
Ah! What a sight!
I stared and glared!
Amidst the unsymmetric pattern
Formed by a number of wires
There stood the brightest star
In its full flare!
A twinkle here
A twinkle there
With the featureful moon
I had the chance to wander!
I wondered and smiled
For there lied just us
Mesmerized by one another’s beauty
On the bed and up, above!
I tried sleeping
As i love dreaming
But its eye on me, dominated
So, here I am penning down the beauty!
♥♥
I love that you found your own ‘cage’…even though it reminds me forcibly of a recurring childhood nightmare of ‘singing wires’ 🙂
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I am glad you liked it! I hope ‘singing wires’ vanish soon! 😀
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They have been gone for decades…thankfully! 🙂
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What a wonderful moment captured… though is it sound of love really?
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Not until I start singing my poem..! 😀
And I am glad you liked it..thank you!! 🙂
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Lovely poem but….where are the sounds of love as directed by the prompt? I appreciate multi-tasking but that requires fulfilling all of the prompts.
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I am glad you liked it. 🙂
I believe in writing as per my thoughts as and when they float and not for particular prompts. And in poetry, I think there lie hidden and unhidden meanings and if they somehow relate to the given prompt, only then I link in! 🙂
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With all due respect, if you unable to decipher the meaning plus the relation to the prompt, I wont be able to help you on that!
Its all about how you connect with the hidden aspects of poetry.
Its all about how you imagine the situation described.
It is good manners to judge and comment on writings which you can understand, after all there is no compulsion!
And if you have an issue, you are free to request the host to remove the link!
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SMiLes.. my FriEnd.. every word
IS A sound of Love when
exPresSinG beauty
and certainly
Love for moon..
Love for sKy..
Love for blUe
eYes.. gReen and
BroWn in Words can
SinG Love true with or
without explicit words that
cannot heRe thE implicit SonG
of Love words SunG in TruE liGht tongue
of words
long
and
short..
no matter what
Love Sings when iSREAL..:)
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I am all smiles after reading your view! I am glad that atleast one of the readers could connect to it that way! 😀
Thank you for dropping by and appreciating my words! 🙂 🙂
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sMiLes.. my friend.. you
are welcome and i am
saddened that the two
administrators above from
dVerse seem too tone deaf now
to heRe a SonG oF youR words
and this is precisely why i never
link with dVerse anymore and just
poetically respond for fun.. as i am not
in this for A poet ‘business’ for ‘science’..am
in this for
Love
noW and
noThing else..
smiles.. this was by
far the best poem i’ve
read all day long.. sAdly
some folks cannot see the
boards they bring with
eYes that see
less than
what
truly beautiful
poetry can bring
iN a sonG aS Lamp oF liGht..:)
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This was my first out there and looks like I found readers with diverse and diverging views! 😀
And I believe in letting all have their say on my work though its different altogether this time! 😀
And I love the way you pen down your opinion- the poetic flow with ‘smiles’- lots of positivity!! 🙂 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
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SMiLes
FriEnd..
aGain..
i see liFe
As enCourAging
Thank you..:)
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A wondrous moment captured ❤️ so beautifully penned.
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Thank you Sanaa!! 🙂 🙂
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What a lovely poem! You instill in us readers a sense of magic.
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Thank you! I am glad that my words are doing wonders for my readers!! 🙂 🙂
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This is indeed nice. I say well done.
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I am glad you liked it! Thank you! 🙂
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So happy to see this..!:) 🙂
Thank you..!! 🙂
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Beautifully written. (Found via Opinionated Man)
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Thank you!! 🙂
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I always marvel at the full Moon and I can understand your beautiful pennings 🙂
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Beautiful sights make us all write..something we all poetry lovers have in common I guess! 😀
Thank you..!! 🙂 🙂
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Something that I love seeing..a pingback to approve!! 😀
Thank you Jacqueline!! 🙂 🙂
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